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Wow, the flowchart is far more useful than i thought!

Glad you like it, now you don't have to reset all the story to check all :)

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I've tried out all the routes and only managed to get 52/58 images. Could you please provide some hints on where they are, or are 6 of them still locked?

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Really nicely done though

Hi, that could be a bug, if you've already gone through all the routes all the photos should have been unlocked

Just to confirm, can you enter the game and wait about 10 seconds on the initial screen and then enter the gallery? maybe after waiting it will mark all correct

There are some messages that are just a blank white text box. My guess is that the images were supposed to appear there, but couldn't load?

That's more strange :/ if the chat have an error to load the image it gets a transparent box where should be that image.

Could you tell me the previous or next message in that empty text box?

One was the last message that David sent before leaving the gc (The route where David sends many pictures and the one audio), another one was during the ntr fantasy talk, located right above the mc response "But would you like it?".

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But my original problem of having less images is fixed now. It shows 58/58. Thanks

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Ok I see what happened here, those messages only show an emoji, maybe your device is not able to read them properly, I'll add it to the things to check, thanks for the report

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The basegame is really solid now, I like the way it's written in multiple stories. I want to see where this story goes, keep up the good work, the interface is great.

I'm glad you like it

The next update will have more girls ;)

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I like you a lot, and the girl is beautiful, the fact that she is not NETORASE gives her a good air, most make the boyfriend a cuckold by his own decision, I think that should be optional at most, I am really enjoying the game, great jobI like you a lot, and the girl is beautiful, the fact that she is not NETORASE gives her a good air, most make the boyfriend a cuckold by his own decision, I think that should be optional at most, I am really enjoying the game, great job

Thank you very much for your comment, I hope you enjoy the next updates, (there will be more girls soon)

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Sure hope there's gangbang content that the player can participate in, during or maybe sex afterwards.

Also, nice game, I suspect that cath have elicit relations with her dad, hope that gets developed in a *sexual* manner, like raw sex and stuff.

Edit: Oh, forgot to mentioning that despite there being few content so far, I have liked what I saw, with expectation that this will be more frequent in the future of course. It has a good and quick pacing (though not chapter 1), and has potential for frequent depravity, don't be too afraid of repeating some patterns, as just a little repetition establishes some routine for catherine, like if she goes to X, Y would happen or Z might happen, etc. Like, her going to a friend's house always leads to sex, and you might get pics of them multiple times in different dates, that stuff.


Edit 2: and uh, is there a name for the 3 current routes?

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Thanks for your feedback!

I also feel that there is currently little content, mainly my time is spent on programming, I only need the flowchart system (it comes out January 31) and the dating app to have the complete base of the game, from there I will focus on adding more characters.

What you mention about repetition is an idea that I still don't know how to implement exactly but it is planned, I would like to include more mechanics apart from just seeing the story and getting photos, I want something where you can interact in different ways with the characters (The idea would be that based on the story you can access new mechanics, for example, if you have a high relationship level, you can access a special scene or things like that), for now this "development cycle" ends on February 14 and from there I would start adding extra mechanics (Maybe a little slower because I will focus on the content).

For the last thing you mentioned, I hadn't really thought about naming the routes. I feel that with the flowchart it will be visible where you are. In any case, if necessary, I could find a way to name them.

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Thank you for the consideration, I always appreciate when Game Developer is taking time to plan about their game. other than this, i'd like to ask how far the depravities may go.

Like, would there be hentai level gangbangs, beasts (or something), having sex while you're alseep in the same room, having a date while cath's full of semen, etc.


As for something I forgot to mention, since there will be Netorase and *possibly* a lover route in the future (a tradition in this genre), I'd like to suggest a way to "mix" events of different routes, there will be people who mix up their own routes in these types of games (I admit I am one of them)

Like someone maximizing both the amount of NTR sex as well as Pure Love, or maybe they liked an event in one route and wanted to include that in their run in the other. this might be a little tricky to implement, but this essentially boils down to what kind of kinks they want in their route or endings.


And if you finish the stuff you want to finish, you might even add "Mini Ends" to some decisions, like if cath got pregnant by the friend or if she knows who the father is at all, that might add some details in the ending that changes its subtext in addition to the route. But this is some late stage stuff, I just want to put this out there, since it will add some replayability for a (relatively) small amount of effort in story writing.

(though, I understand if that's hard to code, this is a "finishing touch" type thing so you can ignore that for now, I don't want to put pressure on you.)

Again, I thank you for making this game, I like it so far! 👍

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That's an important point because it happens to me too (you see one of the characters and you want to see them in certain scenarios or situations), for now I don't think you can make a "mix" of events in the story because with each scene a unique combination of events would be added and it doesn't scale well, so for now the story will have some fixed routes.

BUUUUT since I know that fetishes and kinks are important the next step I'm thinking about (it's not final) is that once you finish or advance in the story those "events" are unlocked.

The events are independent (For example, the chat from the day Catherine had a date with you and she was full of semen) so those can contain whatever without affecting the main story much so all the depravities you want would enter there (If people ask for it and as long as it's legal haha), in theory they could also be filtered by type.

Finally, the idea of "Mini Ends" I hadn't really thought about it, but I agree that it would give a little extra to the story, but as you say it would be something long-term since for now I don't see how I can implement them (For now I've already written it down on the list of ideas).

** For now everything is only on paper and one or another prototype, in the future, I hope the story chapter becomes just a segment of the game to provide context, while the main focus should be the interactions with the girls.

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Is only a Netorase game or will have Netorare content in some point of the game?

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With the recent reset of the story I pretend to do a more Netorare one (the next update will show more Netorare aspects), when the story ends I will add more girls to chat (I'm thinking to add 2 more, netorare and netorase respectively)

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Well firts that nothing I know this is a demo but... If you will make a demo, include at least 1 NTR scene, I can only play the 1st chapter and nothing happens, I can't say if there are something to improve or rate if I can't find nothing of content.

Second, maybe to make the game more interesting you can try to add some "audio messages" (I was thinking in "call phones" but if there are not response from the users isn't a "Phone call" unless that the user can answer a "phone call" with written messages...) that maybe can make the game less boring with only text and some images.

And third, talking about images... The game need more of it, lots and lots of images, only in the fist chapter there are only one image (And wasnt NTR, only the girl naked, very boring, sorry but I feel it like that).

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Sure, with the next updates I will expand more the 3 current routes that are in the game now, and the NTR  theme will be more present.

The audio messages are planned but I need to request a commission to a voice actress (I'm still thinking about adding something like just moans though)

For your third point, can you only see one image? currently there're 12 images divided between 3 routes options, to see them you can go to the settings app and reset the chat to be able to repeat (I'm working on a flowchart system too to make that more easy).

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1) I will wait for more updates before play it again to play it with more content and give you a better and more complete rate.

2) If you need a good VA I recomend Misuzugon, she have a very sexy voice and have packs with moans, maybe this help you to advance more and better with the "Audio Messages".

3) Maybe I need play more and try play better with the options but like I said before is better wait for more updates.

4) I was thinking in what you said before of 2 more girls and since you will do one NTR profile more and the other will be NTS, maybe the second NTR girl can start being NTS and become after in NTR to be a middle point between the first profile and the third profile (And you can make a choice to let the player decide if want continue with the NTS form or become it in a NTR story)
For example: The girl ask to the MC (Player) if want continue or not with the NTS experience if he want continue with the NTS the story will continue being NTS but if he ask her to stop the story will become in NTR (The girl want continue with the new experience even if her boyfriend/Husband don't want it)

I hope this inspire you and help you to improve the game (And to please the more type of public possible)

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Thanks a lot for your feedback, maybe the next update you wanna play is the v0.4.0 (Feb-14), where the story will end, now a lot of the time I have for this  goes to the programing side but with that update I expect to have the majority of the components and game programing done. Then the main focus will be on the content.

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Game looks great so far, I'm loving the relationship between the two and the art looks great.

How's the next update looking? Any idea when it might come out?

Also let me know if you'd be interested in getting some help with proofreading. I'd be happy to help.

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Hi, thanks for your feedback!

The next update will be available on January 5, It will include the response system and a reset of the current story, with this, the story will have múltiple routes.

For the proofreading, I'm thinking to make a discord server to share ideas or possible features, but that may be at the end of the month, with the next update I gonna share a little "roadmap" of the next couple of features and the things I will make.

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Looking forward to it!